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Ever seen an ice sculpture?
I have,
I look into the mirror every day
That is all I see.

Have you ever longed for the winter to end?
I do.
All I can observe is a continuous cold spell
With no sign of a thaw around the corner.

Have you ever wanted to be the ice queen?
I did.
When I was young I thought she was wonderful
Now I know her I’m not too sure.

Can you see nothing but snow?
I can’t.
All I see is a white calm
No doubt before the storm hits in.

Do you wish for it to end?
I tried
But it will not stop
The storm will continue till the end.

Do you know when that will be?
I don’t.
Though in my eyes it will only fade
When there is no more of anything.
©2005-2009 ~nim21
:iconnim21:

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Self explanitory i think.

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:icongnd-zer0:
You're style is very calm and very clear. The extended metaphor here is very well defined no questions here. You'r form is well done and consistant throughout the work. I have , I do , I did , I can't, I tried, I don't. It makes quite a statement in its self dosn't it? Question, responce, reason, conclusion. Each stanza is well formed and thought out. Great job. Great expression.
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Thank you very much :)

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